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a song i wrote

1/6/2017

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Rain,on the ocean

​chorus:
Rain,
rain,
rain on the ocean
rain,
rain,
rain on the ocean

Is so beautiful
falling
falling silently
silently
teardrops
from the sky
that utter not a sound

 (chorus)

Where the droplets hit
rings 
spreading outwards
forever steady on their paths

(chorus)

Me,myself and I
just sitting there
gazing
upon this profound perfection
deep,cryptic blue
mottled
with smooth identical orbs
spreading,always spreading

(chorus)

What swims to and fro
beneath that surface
can they tell
can they tell
do they know about the 
teardrops from the sky,
dappling their domain

(chorus)

Teardrops from the sky.

Written by Marin Brook McGlynn

2 Comments
rachel
6/6/2017 21:22:24

love the alliteration, marin!

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12/17/2019 06:46:01

You do really have what it takes to become a song writer. I love how you were able to express your thoughts and emotions on this song. Your words are so deep and meaningful which is why I believe that you know what you are really doing. It has always been my dream as well to be able to write songs that will enable me to inspire and help others emotionally or event mentally. In line with this, I would like you to know how amazed I am right now and I am hoping that you will continue what you have already started.

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